Unit 2: Writing Complete Sentences and Paragraphs

Day 28 of 30

Revise writing based on feedback

K-2English Language Arts

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Learning Objective

I can revise writing based on feedback.

Today's Lesson

Today we will learn how to revise writing based on feedback. Reading and writing help us share our ideas with others.

Editing and revising make your writing better! Editing means fixing mistakes like capital letters, spelling, and punctuation. Revising means changing your writing to make it clearer or more interesting—you might add details, remove parts that don't fit, or reorder sentences. When you edit and revise, read your writing out loud, check one thing at a time (like capitals first, then spelling), and ask: "Does this make sense? Could I say it better?" Good writers always edit and revise!

Let's break this down step by step so it's easy to understand. Follow along with the examples, and don't worry if it takes some practice to get the hang of it!

Remember: Making mistakes is part of learning. If something is tricky, try again, look at the examples, or ask for help.

Key Terms
Reading

Looking at words and understanding them

Writing

Making words and sentences on paper

Activities
Instructions
1. Listen to or read the example text about revise writing based on feedback. 2. Point to or highlight key words. 3. Practice with a partner or adult. 4. Share what you learned.
Materials Needed
  • Pencil
  • Practice worksheet
  • Crayons (optional)

Teaching Tip

For younger learners: Use concrete objects and hands-on activities when teaching revise writing based on feedback. Keep sessions short (10-15 minutes) and incorporate movement or songs when possible.

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